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'''Notes from Organizing Workshop, Review of Day One: Changes Recommended for Framing Documents'''<br/><br/> | '''Notes from Organizing Workshop, Review of Day One: Changes Recommended for Framing Documents'''<br/><br/> | ||
1st sentence, removed | 1st sentence, removed “for the benefit of present and future citizens”.<br/> | ||
1st bullet, removed | 1st bullet, removed “through specific programs”.<br/> | ||
2nd bullet, changed | 2nd bullet, changed “establishing a sustainable national infrastructure" to “developing and coordinating sustainable infrastructures”.<br/> | ||
5th bullet, changed | 5th bullet, changed “encouraging and sharing" to “promotion”.<br/> | ||
7th bullet, changed | 7th bullet, changed “relationships across domains and boundaries” to “the participation of diverse communites and relationships across boundaries”.<br/> | ||
Added 8th bullet.<br/><br/> | Added 8th bullet.<br/><br/> | ||
[[NDSA:User:Bhow|Bhow]] 19:57, 21 December 2010 (UTC) | [[NDSA:User:Bhow|Bhow]] 19:57, 21 December 2010 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 15:47, 21 December 2010
Notes from Organizing Workshop, Review of Day One: Changes Recommended for Framing Documents
1st sentence, removed “for the benefit of present and future citizens”.
1st bullet, removed “through specific programs”.
2nd bullet, changed “establishing a sustainable national infrastructure" to “developing and coordinating sustainable infrastructures”.
5th bullet, changed “encouraging and sharing" to “promotion”.
7th bullet, changed “relationships across domains and boundaries” to “the participation of diverse communites and relationships across boundaries”.
Added 8th bullet.
Bhow 19:57, 21 December 2010 (UTC)